in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?

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In several countries, more and more
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are getting interested in looking for the history
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or building they living
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of their living
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is to up the value
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, they can raise the home
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for their
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their feng shui or not. If it is not maybe
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we move to the new
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information
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, but I think the most
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the previous owner of the building. They can
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check the facilities to know their ages, whether it is the new
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or the
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have been repaired or reinforced.
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information is to ask the former owner.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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