The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development
The two maps compare the layout of now and planned development in the centre of a small town named Islip.
Overall
, the downtown will experience a significant change, with more facilities and infrastructure built and real estate added, although
some buildings remain unchanged.
Now, the town centre is divided by the main road
, where there are two rows of shops on either side. And the countryside is located in the north. Apart from housing areas in the heart, a park sits in the eastern part that is
connected with the main road
from the eastern end and a school located in the southwestern is also
linked with the eastern end of the main road
, through two dead-end roads respectively.
In the future, the countryside and shops in the northern part will be replaced by a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park and new houses. Furthermore
, the main road
will be transformed for pedestrians only, and the size of old housing areas will be scaled down. As a result
, the whole downtown of Islip will be surrounded by a dual carriageway, which links all places at Islip. However
, the school is to be kept the same, while
the park will be downsized, thus
making way for the new housing and dual carriageway.Submitted by 76805977 on
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