The table below shows the numbers of visitors to the Ashdown museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart show the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they are with their visit during the same two periods.
The two charts provide information on the satisfaction scores of the people who visited the Ashdown museum one year pre- and post-refurbishment.
Overall
, it can be seen that the satisfaction scores were improved after the museum's construction.
Looking at the charts, the survey showed more guests feeling 'satisfied' after it was refurbished, as it increased from three-tenths to two-fifths, which was the highest score in the new survey. The new building also
raised the 'very satisfied' rating from less than a fifth to just over a third of the guests.
Furthermore
, although
the majority (two fifth) of the people were feeling dissatisfied with the old building, nonetheless
, this
number was significantly reduced to less than a fifth after its refurbishment. Similarly
to that, the number of visitors who reported feeling very dissatisfied was also
reduced by half after the construction. Lastly
, the 'no response' score had no changes, at 5%.Submitted by meliarizkina86 on
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