This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
The presented graph provides information about a quota of 4 various
materials
- Paper & cardboard, glass containers, aluminium Use synonyms
cans
, and Use synonyms
plastics
which were returned within 28 years Use synonyms
period
.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the total amount of recycled Linking Words
materials
increased over the given Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
However
, not all types of Linking Words
materials
indicate Use synonyms
same
growth rates in Correct article usage
the same
this
matter. Linking Words
While
the amount of Linking Words
Use synonyms
Aliminium
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Aluminium
cans
and Use synonyms
plastics
increased gradually when Use synonyms
proportion
of paper& cardboard and glasses contains have Add an article
the proportion
same
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the same
flactuation
in Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
this
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period
.
As is illustrated by the graph, in 1982 just glass containers were returned 50% and 65% respectively. Use synonyms
However
, in the following years glass Linking Words
materials
experienced Use synonyms
consistent
decrease Correct article usage
a consistent
approximately
10%, and Change preposition
of approximately
then
had risen Linking Words
systematicly
and reached from 40% to 60% in 2010. Correct your spelling
systematically
systematic
While
cardboard and paper rates fluctuated in 1990, the proportion improved to 80% but Linking Words
had
dropped to 70% Unnecessary verb
apply
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
.
It is demonstrated that recycling Use synonyms
Use synonyms
aliminium
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aluminium
cans
and Use synonyms
plastics
started later in the years 1986 and 1990 respectively. Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Aliminium
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Aluminium
cans
demonstrated Use synonyms
steady
rise during the whole Correct article usage
a steady
period
. In 1986 the rate of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
aliminium
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aluminium
cans
just was under 10% but Use synonyms
this
proportion drastically increased and end of the Linking Words
period
reached Use synonyms
to
45%. Meanwhile, Change preposition
apply
plastics
were the least recycled Use synonyms
materials
which accounted for 5% and end of the Use synonyms
period
only reached Use synonyms
to
10%.Change preposition
apply
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