The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the variations of owners of power appliances and the number of hours used per household weekly, in a certain country from the years 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, the use of automatic devices
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as washing machines, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners experience significant changes from a lower rate to a higher proportion, though less difference was seen in the aspects of the fridge
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than the amount of time used per week declined throughout the period. On one chart, houses with cooler devices were 0%,
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had a sharp rise to 90%, where it increased slightly to 100% and remained stationed till 2019. Next was the owners of electric brooms which were at the percentage of 30% and continued to add up simultaneously for 60 decades, where it gets to its peak at 100% in the year 2000 and stayed at that pace till 2019.
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the ownership of clothes washers in 1920 was just at 40%,
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increased to 70% in 1960 and fluctuated for 40 decades to a little above 70% in 2019. On the other graph, the number of hours used by these motorized instruments per family was 50% per week in 1920 which had a sudden fall in 1960 to 20%,
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reduces continuously over 40 decades to 10% in 2019.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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