The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
line
chart illustrates the number of closures and opening shops
in a country from 2011 to 2016.
Overall
, there is an insignificant fluctuation in the line
of closed shops
in 2015, the opened shops
line
was about to decrease over the period, and its figure did not change dramatically.
On the Closure line
, it has remained balanced in the number of shops
from when it started in 2011 until 2014 passed, decreasing rapidly and jumping up in 2016. After that, the figure was recorded stay about 5000 to above.
On the opposite side, The Openings dropped in the first years, but over time for 2 years 2012 to 2014. It slightly increases from under 4000 to 6100 and continues to drop by 2000 shops
in 2015. Stay in above 4000 and the figures finally
ended at point 3000Submitted by Alexandre Harvey
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