Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

The provided line graph shows the acid
level
of our
mouth
which is created by the consumption of
fruit
sugar
,
cane
sugar
&
honey
and compares their effects on our tooth
decay
. When the
pH
level
in the
mouth
is above 5.5, acidity remains at
such
a
level
that teeth are unlikely to be in danger of
decay
. Sweet foods,
however
, cause
pH
in the
mouth
to drop for a time, and the longer the
pH
levels remain below 5.5, the greater the possibility for
decay
to occur. The illustration compares
fruit
sugar
,
cane
sugar
and
honey
, which are the most common ingredients of sweet foods, causing the
pH
level
to drop below the danger
level
after 5
minutes
. Among these 3 sweet items,
cane
sugar
decreases the
pH
level
most quickly and causes it to remain the
level
under the danger
level
for the longest period (over 30
minutes
) and
thus
produces the greatest risk among the three. After consuming the
cane
sugar
, the
pH
level
drops to
level
3.5 and remains there for over half an hour.
On the other hand
,
fruit
sugar
causes the acidity
level
of the
mouth
to fall under
pH
level
4 in 5
minutes
and remains under threat
level
for 20
minutes
.
Finally
, the
honey
appears to be less risky among the three causing the
pH
level
to drop to 4.7 in 5
minutes
and proceed to above
pH
5.5
level
within 15
minutes
of consumption. In conclusion, all of the sweet items possess the possibility of causing tooth
decay
and
honey
and
fruit
sugar
are likely to cause less
decay
than
cane
sugar
does.
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