The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
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The presented line graph illustrates the trend of US citizens who preferred to eat in fast food restaurants from 2003 to 2013. Looking at the chart, it is easily apparent that the figure for one or twice in a month in 2013 accounted for the highest tendency. Whilst, the lowest figures were for eating out on a daily basis in 2006 and 2013. The proportion of
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who went to restaurants daily
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under 5%. The number of
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who eat out climbed gradually and peaked at almost 30% in one a week for the years 2003, 2006.
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, in 2013, approximately 33% of
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were willing to junk food once or twice a month.
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, it is seen a decreased pattern for a few times a year and never eaten out. The number of
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who went out a few times a year in 2006
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as many as that of in 2013.
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, the figures reached under 5% in either three years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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