some people think it is a good idea to wear a uniform at work . Do you agree or disagree ?

some individuals believe it is a good idea to dress

a

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uniform

at

work

. I totally agree with

this

statement on the grounds that

uniform

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can bring many benefits including eliminating

discrimination

, creating

sense

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a sense

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of identiy

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identiy

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identity

identify

among

employees

, and

economical

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for

emplyees

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employees

employers

.

To begin

with, there are several reasons why I think

uniform

at

work

is

good

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trend.

Firstly

,

uniform

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uniforms

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at

work

can contribute to eliminating

discrimination

in workplace environments. To illustrate, if all staff wear the same clothes

this

mean

emolyees wil

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employees will

become less vulnerable to exposure to bullying against clothes.

Therefore

, less

discrimination

mean

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means

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the

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productivity of

employees

will enhance, which

mean

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means

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employees

will perform well in their takes.

Furthermore

, if the productivity of

employees

increases the

companies

will earn more money result of services the

employees

will provide for their customers will become better.

Secondly

,

uniform

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uniforms

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at

work

will create a sense of belonging among

employees

toward their

companies

.

This

is because

employees

who wear

uniform

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at

work

are more likely to continue with their

companies

for

long

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time, which

this

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apply

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can reduce cases of quit from jobs among workers.

Consequently

,

less

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fewer

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cases of

quit

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among

employees

mean

companies

are more likely to become successful

companies

.

Finally

,

uniform

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uniforms

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at

work

can save a considerable amount of money for

employees

. To illustrate,

uniform

often is affordable, which mean easy for all

emoplyees

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employees

to purchase

it

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them

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.

To sum up

, I completely think

uniform

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uniforms

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at

work

can bring many advantages for

companies

namely,

mtigate

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mitigate

discrimination

,

create

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creating

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a sense of identity among

employees

, and

it

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apply

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inexpensively.