In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and asking taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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was always a problem that humanity wanted to get rid of.

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, up to

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day, governments of some countries still tolerate

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tendency. Some people might argue that

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is a completely inhumane practice,

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others consider that children might bring a lot of help and gain experience. Personally, I support the former statement. The exploitation of

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during the Victorian era in England is a bright example of

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phenomenon in action. Many

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had to employ their only

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to

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for minimal

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of

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the factory, where workers’ health was threatened

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the constant exposure to soot and coal dust.

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, the “little hands” contributed a lot to the British economy in the nineteenth century. In fact, England was often referred

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the “factory of the world” back in the day. It is safe to say that

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little was earned with cruel ways of

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. Turning to

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modern times, most developing countries still can't prohibit the

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employment

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minors, because of their share in the economy.

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, poor

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that struggle to provide for their children, have no other choice but to send their kids to

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. Where they can have at least a minimum wage

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out their parents.

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, the UN strictly states that every

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has a legally substantiated right to have a happy childhood and adolescence.

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, every developed country prohibits

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giving

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to the education of the youth and contributing to their future.

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of forcing

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to give up their kids to

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with minimum wage, the authorities should provide the parents with higher

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to help out less fortunate

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. Based on my experience, the students are often neglected at

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work places

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and are paid much less.

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, I believe that getting

education

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is better for the youth than working

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young

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age. In conclusion, in my

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children of any age and citizenship shouldn't get employed, but rather contribute their energy and time to

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studies.