The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
the diagram illustrates the way in which electricity is produced by geothermal power.
Overall
, the process consists of five stages, beginning with cold Linking Words
water
, the injection well step, the heating Use synonyms
stage
, the production well segment, the tuning Use synonyms
stage
, and ending with produced electricity.
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To begin
with, cold Linking Words
water
is pumped down approximately 4.5 kilometres to the injection well. Afterwards, Use synonyms
water
goes through a geothermal zone which includes hot rocks, and the Use synonyms
water
undergoes a heating process. Use synonyms
Following
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water
passes the production well Use synonyms
stage
and is pumped up about 4.5 kilometres and Use synonyms
also
goes to the condenser Linking Words
stage
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water
turns to steam.
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Then
, produced steam serves as the main material of the Linking Words
turbine
and the Use synonyms
turbine
is energized by steam. Meanwhile, the generator is powered by the Use synonyms
turbine
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while
the Linking Words
turbine
is playing a fuel role for the generator. Use synonyms
Finally
, the generator produces electricity which is used for human activities and industries.Linking Words
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