The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
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The bar graph gives information about the indexes of
magazines
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per
person
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that were sold in different countries in 2003 and 2005, projecting
also
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potential sales in 2007.
Overall
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, the first three countries (A,B & C) experienced the highest
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in 2003, starting a downtrend in 2005 with the drop in the selling,
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projecting in 2007 another decrease in the number of
magazines
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sold.
On the other hand
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,
country
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D demonstrated an upward trend, commencing with fewer sales in 2003 and
then
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it increased in 2005, with a positive
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for the future.
Finally
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,
country
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E owned the smallest
rates
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including the
projection
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for the future.
To begin
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with,
country
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B was the one who had the biggest
rates
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every year, experiencing a rate of 50
magazines
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per
person
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in 2003, going down to less than 50 in 2005 and slightly decreasing by 2007 with just over 40
magazines
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. Regarding
country
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A,
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one occupied the second place, selling almost 50
magazines
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in 2003 and
then
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dropping its numbers to just over 40 in 2005.
According to
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this
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, the
projection
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for the future indicates another downtrend under 40
magazines
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in 2007.
Regarding
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country
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C, which was located in the third position, showed a rate of around 37
magazines
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per
person
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in 2003, decreasing by 35 in 2005 and potentially dropping to just over 30 by 2007.
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,
country
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D was in fourth place, being the only one with an upward trend during the studied period. At the beginning experienced just under 20 in 2003 but
then
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it increased up to 20 in 2005.
According to
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this
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, its
projection
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by 2007 shows an increase going up just over 20.
Finally
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,
country
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E had the least
rates
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every year, sharing the same index of
magazines
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sold per
person
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in 2003 and the
projection
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for 2007, with around 4
magazines
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, having its peak in 2005 with just under 10
magazines
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per
person
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, also, finally, on the other hand".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, person, rates, country, projection with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Increases
  • Decreases
  • Comparison
  • Significant
  • Projected
  • Sales
  • Economy
  • Digital Media
  • Impact
  • Cultural Factors
  • Analysis
  • Future Trends
  • Market Conditions
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