The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.

The charts show the Australian school leavers did immediately after leaving secondary school.
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Overall
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, the line chart illustrates the demographic
crime
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rate
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in three categories followed by break in
theft
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and robbery which happened in Newport City Centre in the year 2003 to 2012. In 2003, the felony
rate
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in the segment of burglary was reported seven times higher in comparison to robbery which was at approx. 600 cases and nearly 300 in a burglary.
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, car
theft
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was the second most significant
crime
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that happened at that time with 2700 incidents in 2003 but over the period, reports of car robbery remain neutral with fluctuation between 2006 to 2010 and the
crime
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rate
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of car
theft
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slightly dropped to 2000 and 400 incidents in 2012.
On the other hand
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, accounting, the
crime
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of
theft
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in person had followed incident numbers between thousand to 500 and
last
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2012, noted approximately 600 cases. All the major changes have been seen in the
crime
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rate
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of burglary, which started to fall down drastically and
at the end
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of the period recorded 1300 cases in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, rate, theft with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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  • competitive job market
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  • workforce
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