The maps below show Colwick arts centre in 2005 and today.

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The two maps illustrate the small

city

center

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centre

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, which is called Islip as it is now, and improving

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apply

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in the future.

Overall

, there will be many changes in Islip town

center

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in the future.

Firstly

, the main

road

will be removed, and a standard

road

will be built like a

round about

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and

also

some

shops

will be replaced with new buildings and there will be added area for pedestrians. Other things will not be changed. Nowadays, there is a main

road

in the countryside and

also

there are plenty of

shops

around the main

road

. The first housing is located in the

city

center

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and the second housing is built in the south of town.

In addition

, there is located school next to the second housing in the western-south of the

city

and

also

park

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the park

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is built in the eastern-south of town. When it comes to additional modifications in

plan

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. The main

road

and

shops

will be replaced with a bus station, shopping

center

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, car

park

and new housing.

Besides

, first housing will be moved to the western-south of the

city

and

also

there will be developed

shops

in the

city

center

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centre

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Moreover

area

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an area

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will be added for pedestrians and

also

new housing will be developed next to the

park

and there

will not be changed nothing

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will not be changed anything

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school

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the school

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, second housing and

park

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