Tourism is increasing day by day in nations. What are the affects on environment by tourism and what are the solution to curb these problems?

Several adverse effects of tourism could be seen
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atmosphere
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, It has increased
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air pollution.
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is because of the fact as
tourits
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tourists
reach different destinations by trains or their private-owned vehicles,
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emission of poisonous gases is rising.
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, in India, Amritsar is a religious tourist place, where people from distinct states come on four-wheelers and bikes causing sixty
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air contamination.
Additionally
, tourism needs the establishment of museums, parks and zoos.
Therefore
,
this
procedure is leading the production of several contaminants.
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, residual
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cements
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that
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thrown
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water bodies
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water pollution and
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the fertility of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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