Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Some say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of possessing an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern days,

people

have lived more and more years longer than before. Some

people

believe that they cause more pressure on

governments

as those

people

are less productive and need special

care

,

while

others believe that they are more supportive of youth and

the

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family connections and

care

among family

members

. There are plenty of advantages if the no of elder

people

increased.

However

, those advantages are not respected by

society

's

members

who

care

only for money, those advantages are useful to

society

. When

new

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generation

brought

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is brought

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up around their grandparents and saw how their parents treat their fathers and mothers well, the child will

full

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of love

to

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their parents and will treat them well .

therefore

the connection among family

members

willon

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will

bringing up their chi be increased.

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,

the

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society

will

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full

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fully

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connectedf

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connected

humanity

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to humanity

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.

For instance

, human beings in

aussian

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Russian

countries are the most

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society

because of the

care

given by

society

members

, especially by family

members

they don't depend on institutions to

care

for old

people

in the countries.

Beside

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that, older

people

transffere

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transfer

their

expriances

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experiences

to youth .

Although

,

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older

people

can make

society

reflect more sense of

humble

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humility

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, and

care

, they may put pressure on

on

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governments

. Especially when parents

failled

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failed

filled

in bringing up their children to what extent it is important to respect them and take

care

of them .to explain if we do not bring up our children to take

care

of us especially when we become older, they will not do it

then

the

governments

ought to make institutions for older

people

.

That is

really what happened in Europe countries.

For example

, in the

Netherlands

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the

governments

make special

building

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buildings

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for

people

whose

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age

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ages

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from

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55 to

80or

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80 or

more.

This

can be considered as pressure on the

governments

Moreover

, the older

people

have become less productive so they will not add extra money to nations.

Furthermore

, they will take pensions from the government. In conclusion, some

people

think that old

people

the

governments

as they produce

less

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outcomes and

also

need government expenditures,

while

others think that they give us a sense of empathy and give their experience to youth.