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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.

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While
 some
people
 believe that advertising is a great
way
 to promote a
product
, others might disagree since it is now used up a lot it is no longer
apealing
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appealing
.
However
, I personally think that advertising is indeed a great
way
 to persuade
customers
especially
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 in the modern days we see how it affected
people
.
This
 essay will discuss both opinions and I will be giving my own. For so many decades
companies
 have tried different ways to persuade buyers, and
according to
 so many
people
companies
 were successful. Before advertisement was a common
way
 to lead
customers
 to purchase what they need,
however
, nowadays promotions had
people
 curious
into
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 buying stuff that they might not even need, which was a win-win situation that satisfied both sellers and buyers. Currently one of the greatest ways to advertise is TikTok. So many small businesses have
develpoed useing
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developed using
 only TikTok which helped
publishing
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 their products and show
it
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them
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 to viewers that might be interested. Advertising was indeed successful in convincing
people
into
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to
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bying
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buying
 a certain
product
.
However
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people
 are not
interseted
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interested
 in promotions anymore.
People
 are now bored of seeing the same advertisement over and over again.
Nevertheless
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 studies have recently
showed
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shown
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 that
companies
 that do not change their advertisements every now and
then
 tend to lose
customers
 more than the average. In my opinion, I firmly believe that creativity
in addition
 to diversity in promotions will never fail to
apeal
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appeal
customers
.
furthermore
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 constant
change
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changes
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 in
product
advertisement
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advertisements
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 will get more
people
's attention to make more purchases.
To conclude
, promotion is the most common
way
 to help sell a
product
, even though some
people
 might disagree. As I mentioned before
companies
 need to improve their ways of advertising so
people
 will not lose interest.
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