Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.
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, I personally think that advertising is indeed a great Linking Words
way
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customers
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especially
in the modern days we see how it affected Add the comma(s)
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people
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essay will discuss both opinions and I will be giving my own.
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people
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companies
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way
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customers
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however
, nowadays promotions had Linking Words
people
curious Use synonyms
into
buying stuff that they might not even need, which was a win-win situation that satisfied both sellers and buyers. Currently one of the greatest ways to advertise is TikTok. So many small businesses have Change preposition
about
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publishing
their products and show Wrong verb form
publish
it
to viewers that might be interested.
Advertising was indeed successful in convincing Correct pronoun usage
them
people
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into
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to
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buying
product
. Use synonyms
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However
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,However
people
are not Use synonyms
interseted
in promotions anymore. Correct your spelling
interested
People
are now bored of seeing the same advertisement over and over again. Use synonyms
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Nevertheless
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showed
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shown
companies
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then
tend to lose Linking Words
customers
more than the average.
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in addition
to diversity in promotions will never fail to Linking Words
apeal
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appeal
customers
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product
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advertisement
will get more Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
people
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To conclude
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way
to help sell a Use synonyms
product
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people
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