In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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technology will always develop and make everything more advanced.

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people

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facilitated by the internet for everything that they want.

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entertainment like music or movie, but today either

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listen

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a music

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a movie it will be so

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because

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technology is growing day by day,

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in every aspect in our life. Subsequent,

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online

books

or we can call it e-

books

is a better way to get information than

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hardcopy form. E

books

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people

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practition

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instead

buy a

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of a magazine or a newspaper, we will

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choose

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to download it

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internet

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and not spend any money

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many advantages for us because it is cheap and you can open it in anywhere and

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want In conclusion, in my

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do not want expending their money

for

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the

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newspapers or

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because there is free online reading

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on two

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technology is always growing up and

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