In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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years later,
people
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will not want to use their money to buy newspapers or
books
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because there will be an online source freely.
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I'm
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with
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opinion and
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essay will discuss
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phenomena
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technology will always develop and make everything more advanced.
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,
people
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facilitated by the internet for everything that they want.
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, in the past many of us was really hard to access
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entertainment like music or movie, but today either
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listen
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a music
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music
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or just
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a movie it will be so
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because
of
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the
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technology is growing day by day,
this
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thing is
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in every aspect in our life. Subsequent,
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online
books
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or we can call it e-
books
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is a better way to get information than
a
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hardcopy form. E
books
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makes
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people
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more
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according to
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the
practition
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practitioner
and the
flexibelity
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flexibility
of
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. I will give you an example,
instead
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buy a
hardform
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hard form
of a magazine or a newspaper, we will
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choose
chosee
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choose
to download it
in
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on
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the
internet
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and not spend any money
also
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it
have
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many advantages for us because it is cheap and you can open it in anywhere and
anythime
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anytime
that
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you
want In conclusion, in my
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opinion
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I agree with the situation that
people
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do not want expending their money
for
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on
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the
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apply
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newspapers or
books
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because there is free online reading
depend
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on two
reason
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reasons
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.
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, because
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technology is always growing up and
secondly
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depends on the benefit of the
e
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e-books
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books
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that
cheap
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are cheap
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and
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flexible
flexibel
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flexible
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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