The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the variety stage in the
cheese making
process from the original ingredient to promotion in the shop. In total, there are nine stages in the whole process.
Add a hyphen
cheese-making
First,
is the step called “Acidification”. Put the raw milk and Bacteria in a large bottle. In this
step, it will produce some tenzyme
and solidification into the Correct your spelling
enzyme
enzymes
Curds
. Then
, the Curds
were cut into small pieces.
After that, put all the Curds
into a huge bowl, heating and draining. After heating and draining the Curds
, add salt inside. Next,
is the stage of Shaping. The machine will produce each cheese
with the same size and weight. After Shaping the cheese
, they need the
Fermentation in 2 months.
The Correct article usage
apply
last
two steps are packaging the cheese
and sending the cheese
to the shop by truck. Overall
, the whole product process needs over 2 months.Submitted by chowyeewing19 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese, curds with synonyms.
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