Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are several arguments concerning whether
people
should repeat their regular
habits
to prevent changes rather than the consistent redevelopment of them.
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my personal standpoint, our
life
will not be better if we reject the
experiences
of new things for the following reasons. On one hand, the inherent sense of comfort a person has will be retained and prevent them from performing possible mistakes if they follow their familiar
habits
. In fact, many
people
seem to have the tendency to repeat things they have done in the past just
due to
the fear of negative effects that may occur when they are unable to cope with sudden issues which may act as a deterioration in their personal
life
and in terms of mentality.
However
, the probability of social isolation and not catching up with the continual improvement of the era is higher in
this
way, because they are not willing to face unexpected issues when
try
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new
experiences
.
On the other hand
, renewing our personal aspects and
habits
may provide an abundance of opportunities for
life
. The reason is that there are always limitations that appear even if we find something is our best choice;
therefore
, continually stepping out of our comfort zone will help us to find alternative
habits
or
experiences
to develop skills and knowledge and not to repeat mistakes.
In addition
,
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will offer the chance to adapt and self-develop promptly with the evolution of society and the era. In the past, note-taking was the most common type of keeping knowledge and lessons in school;
nevertheless
, in today's era,
people
who are able to utilise technology
such
as computers witness better productivity than
people
who are still physically taking
note
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on
papers
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.
Take
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everything into consideration,
i
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I
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believe keeping things modernise and renew
provide
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huge advantages for our personal
life
when we not only be able to cope with any immediate improvement of the world but
also
widen crucial
experiences
without being eliminated from the society
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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