The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particular university
The map
has
illustrates the future plan for a Biology School in a particular university.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
indoor
sports hall, café and central library remain unchanged. But in the Correct article usage
the indoor
future
the forest area will Add a comma
,future
be raze
to Change the verb form
be razed
built
classrooms and Wrong verb form
build
car
park for Correct article usage
a car
staffs
.
From an Fix the agreement mistake
staff
overall
perspective, it is clear that
the tree in the middle of the road will be cut down and built into office
and lab. At the bottom left of the road, trees Correct article usage
an office
cut
down to Add a missing verb
were cut
built
a car park for Wrong verb form
build
staffs
. Fix the agreement mistake
staff
Drama
centre will Correct article usage
The drama
replaced
Change the verb form
replace
a
music centre.
It can be seen from the map, in the future the IT centre will be big and there will be one more teaching building.Correct article usage
the
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