The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.

The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.
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The Bar chart compares the rates at which urban/suburban and rural households had a connection to the
Internet
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from the year 1999 to 2004
Overall
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, it is noticeable that houses with
internet
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access in the Urban/Suburban region continued to remain higher than houses in the rural region across the period In 1999, only a few apartments in both regions had access to the
Internet
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.
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, in the year ,2000 the rate of residence with
internet
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connection in developed areas had doubled which was about 30%
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that of the rural fields had a slight increase of about 15%. In the following years, households with online access in suburban/urban locations experienced a dramatic increase all through the years
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homes in rural areas noticed a gradual increase and by the end of the period (2004), houses with
internet
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entry in suburban and urban areas were about 55%
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that of the rural region was about 35%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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