Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller building. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?

The importance of accommodation has now become more debatable with many people

claimng

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that cities need to construct more skyscrapers to deal with population expansion

while

others believe there should be housing construction on spacious land. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on my arguments related to

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of both these conceptions,

as well as

lead to some conclusions. The first and foremost evidence to prove the former notion is beneficial is

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the usefulness of space.

In other words

, designers can make the most of a certain room for housing. With about 800 square

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, Landmark 3 of Vinhomes can be up to 50 storeys high with 13 apartments per floor,

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of space, communities living in these apartment buildings can enjoy a range of other advanced facilities

such

as

playground

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,

supermarket

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or parking.

On the other hand

, there can be some unsafe risks

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fire or explosion.

In addition

, these skyscrapers

mostly

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built in hustle and bustle cities

that

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noisy and busy,

thus

residents there can be dissatisfied with that hectic lifestyle. Regard to accommodations built on land, dwellers there definitely have far more open room to do daily activities and take a rest.

Moreover

, not only traffic is more convenient but the environment there is

also

fresher and more comfortable.

However

, it is obvious that it will take enormous space

as well as

a large amount of investment, which can lead to some other problems

such

as difficulty in urban planning. In conclusion, either living in skyscrapers or building housing on wider land has benefits and demerits.

Therefore

, it is necessary for governments and residents to consider carefully before

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up with a reasonable plan suited

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conditions and needs of that area.