Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller building. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?
The importance of accommodation has now become more debatable with many people
claimng
that cities need to construct more skyscrapers to deal with population expansion Correct your spelling
claiming
claim
while
others believe there should be housing construction on spacious land. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on my arguments related to benefits
of both these conceptions, Correct article usage
the benefits
as well as
lead to some conclusions.
The first and foremost evidence to prove the former notion is beneficial is that
the usefulness of space. Correct word choice
apply
In other words
, designers can make the most of a certain room for housing. With about 800 square metre
, Landmark 3 of Vinhomes can be up to 50 storeys high with 13 apartments per floor, Change to a plural noun
metres
for example
. Beside
saving Correct your spelling
Besides
variety
of space, communities living in these apartment buildings can enjoy a range of other advanced facilities Add an article
a variety
such
as playground
, Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
supermarket
or parking. Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
On the other hand
, there can be some unsafe risks as
fire or explosion. Correct quantifier usage
such as
In addition
, these skyscrapers mostly
built in hustle and bustle cities Add a missing verb
are mostly
that
is
noisy and busy, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
thus
residents there can be dissatisfied with that hectic lifestyle.
Regard to accommodations built on land, dwellers there definitely have far more open room to do daily activities and take a rest. Moreover
, not only traffic is more convenient but the environment there is also
fresher and more comfortable. However
, it is obvious that it will take enormous space as well as
a large amount of investment, which can lead to some other problems such
as difficulty in urban planning.
In conclusion, either living in skyscrapers or building housing on wider land has benefits and demerits. Therefore
, it is necessary for governments and residents to consider carefully before come
up with a reasonable plan suited Change the verb form
coming
the
conditions and needs of that area.Change preposition
to the
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...