Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller building. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?

The importance of accommodation has now become more debatable with many people
claimng
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claiming
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that cities need to construct more skyscrapers to deal with population expansion
while
others believe there should be housing construction on spacious land. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on my arguments related to
benefits
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of both these conceptions,
as well as
lead to some conclusions. The first and foremost evidence to prove the former notion is beneficial is
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the usefulness of space.
In other words
, designers can make the most of a certain room for housing. With about 800 square
metre
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, Landmark 3 of Vinhomes can be up to 50 storeys high with 13 apartments per floor,
for example
.
Beside
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variety
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of space, communities living in these apartment buildings can enjoy a range of other advanced facilities
such
as
playground
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playgrounds
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,
supermarket
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or parking.
On the other hand
, there can be some unsafe risks
as
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fire or explosion.
In addition
, these skyscrapers
mostly
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built in hustle and bustle cities
that
is
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noisy and busy,
thus
residents there can be dissatisfied with that hectic lifestyle. Regard to accommodations built on land, dwellers there definitely have far more open room to do daily activities and take a rest.
Moreover
, not only traffic is more convenient but the environment there is
also
fresher and more comfortable.
However
, it is obvious that it will take enormous space
as well as
a large amount of investment, which can lead to some other problems
such
as difficulty in urban planning. In conclusion, either living in skyscrapers or building housing on wider land has benefits and demerits.
Therefore
, it is necessary for governments and residents to consider carefully before
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up with a reasonable plan suited
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conditions and needs of that area.
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