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The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.

The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
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The given table chart displays spending on three various categories, namely
food
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 clothing and
leisure
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 in five major countries in 2002. (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and
Turkey
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)
Overall
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, it is obvious that residents of any supplied city expend more money on
food
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, drinks, and tobacco than other items. It is noteworthy that
Turkey
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 surpassed and culminated other countries in any category. It is interesting to note that consumer
expenditure
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 in Italy and Sweden represented a low proportion among supplied cities. The spending in Sweden on
food
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, and clothing depicted the lowest percentage which is accounted for 15.77% and 5.40%, respectively.
However
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,
expenditure
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 on
leisure
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 and education showed the second highest peak after
Turkey
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 depicting 3.22%.
Furthermore
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, the proportion of national
expenditure
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 in Italy reached the highest level on clothing and footwear. The spending of Ireland, Spain, and
Turkey
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 displayed higher percentages almost in all categories. It is noteworthy that residents of
Turkey
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 spent more money on all three categories, which culminated at 32.14%, 6.63, and 4.35% on
Food
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, Clothing, and
Leisure
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, respectively.
Additionally
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,
expenditure
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 on
Leisure
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 illustrated the lowest level of
Leisure
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 among cities, even though, the proportion of spending was higher on
food
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 and clothing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, leisure, turkey, expenditure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "displays" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure patterns
  • consumer spending
  • cultural priorities
  • economic conditions
  • disposable income
  • standard of living
  • work-life balance
  • proportion of spending
  • cultural preferences
  • comparison of spending
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