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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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İn modern times, despite
developing
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 healthcare system, a larger number of
people
 are trying to search and probe different medicines
instead
 of visiting professionals
such
 as physiologists and doctors. Personally, I AM OF THE OPINION THAT IT HAS BOTH POSITIVE AND NOXIOUS SIDES.
TO BEGIN
, IN MY VIEW, INHABITANTS WHO ARE LIVING IN RURAL AREAS ARE EAGER TO CHECK ALTERNATIVE MEDICAL APPROACHINGS, BECAUSE OF SOME REASONS.
FOR INSTANCE
, ONE OF THE MOST PREVALENT REASONS IS TO SAVE
TIME
 AND MONEY. NOWADAYS, EVERYONE HAS TO WAIT IN A QUEUE.
ADDITIONALLY
, PAYMENTS AND FEES ARE VERY EXPENSIVE FOR A CONSULTATION WITH DOCTORS.
FURTHERMORE
, SOME
PEOPLE
, ESPECIALLY THE OLDER GENERATION HAS A TENDENCY TO CURE THEMSELVES THROUGH THESE WAYS, BECAUSE THEY DO NOT BELIEVE THE MODERN TECHNOLOGY AND ITS BENEFITS.
MOREOVER
, IN 21TH CENTURY,
PRICES
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 OF MEDICINES ARE COSTLY AND THERE ARE NOT ADEQUATE CHEMISTS IN SOMEWHERE.
THAT IS
 WHY, A GREATER PART OF THE POPULATION CONSIDER THAT ALTERNATIVE MEDICAL WAYS ARE AFFORDABLE.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, IT HAS SOME CRITICAL DETRIMENTAL EFFECTS ON
PEOPLE
 LIVES. MOST OF THE
TIME
, OLD MEDICAL APPROACHINGS ARE ABLE TO BE HARMFUL AND THEREBY MORE SERIOUS DISEASES EMERGE. AS AN EXAMPLE, ONE
TIME
 I CAUGHT A COLD AND
THEREFORE
 HAD A SORE THROAT. MY GRANDMOTHER PREPARED A MIXTURE FOR ME SO AS TO MAKE ME FEEL BETTER, BUT ONE DAY LATER I SUFFERED FROM HARSHER PAIN AND HAD TO GO TO THE HOSPITAL. Since that day, I have not believed
to
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 these types of prescriptions.
Also
, today, there are abundant
people
 who are dying for receiving pills or painkillers without reading their prescriptions and instructions or not visiting professionals on
time
. In conclusion,
according to
 my opinion, I consider that trying alternative medical ways are a big mistake and every sick person should escape from these.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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