Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records. Which approach do you prefer, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, there are various ways to

record

our life, like social-networking

services

. Some think using these

services

is good to

record

themselves

while

others do not

record

their lives. For me, I would like to

prefer

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create some records by uploading my thoughts or photos to social networking sites. In the following, I will explain my preferences in more depth.

Firstly

, I would like to communicate with my

friends

by sharing my lifestyle. As you know that we are not able to meet our

friends

anytime,

however

, if we could use social-networking

services

, we can keep in touch with

friends

more effectively.

Moreover

, I am working as an entertainment creator so I want to get feedback from my

friends

by uploading my daily pictures or diaries.

Therefore

this

makes me think deeper and wider.

Secondly

, I can contact widely with my thoughts or

content

by uploading

content

on online

services

. As I said I'm a creator, so it is necessary to be good at and comfortable with uploading

content

. Using social networking sites is the best way to get used to making people-friendly online

content

. Indeed, I can interact with a wider social group, not just

friends

but

also

a worldwide community, by using social-networking

services

This

is the best benefit for me to improve my job skills,

furthermore

, I

also

enjoy

this

situation.

Hence

this

is why I prefer to

record

my life by using some sites. To summarize, I would like to communicate and think deeply with my

friends

and contact wider communities to improve my job skills. In conclusion, I prefer to create my records by uploading my experiences on social-networking

services

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