The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particular university

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The plans illustrate the future layout of the school of biology in a specific university. Looking from the

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perspective it is readily apparent that the territory will experience some significant changes,

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, the main road, a big central library and an indoor sports hall will be unaltered.

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with the green zone, only a few trees which were growing at the top and on the left side of the bottom of the map will be left,

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the fact that a car park for staff, an office and a lab will be established in those areas.

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the plan of the buildings, a huge teaching space and a lecture room at the bottom will be divided into two parts each,

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a café nearby will not be altered.

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, an IT centre will be increased in its size,

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, a drama hall will be replaced by a music one.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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154 words

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For many people, the reason they work hard is earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. [212]