The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particular university

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The plans illustrate the future layout of the school of biology in a specific university. Looking from the

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perspective it is readily apparent that the territory will experience some significant changes,

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, the main road, a big central library and an indoor sports hall will be unaltered.

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with the green zone, only a few trees which were growing at the top and on the left side of the bottom of the map will be left,

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the fact that a car park for staff, an office and a lab will be established in those areas.

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the plan of the buildings, a huge teaching space and a lecture room at the bottom will be divided into two parts each,

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a café nearby will not be altered.

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, an IT centre will be increased in its size,

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, a drama hall will be replaced by a music one.

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