The bar chart shows the amount of money which was invested by different museums in London.
The chart illustrates the amount of investing money in a variety of London
museums
.
Overall
, the amount of investment in London museums
are
highest in August and September, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
speacially
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especially
is
the British Correct your spelling
in
Museum
. In addition
, National Museum
has the
lower funding than others , and the average Correct article usage
apply
of
funding in October Change preposition
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peaks
the
bottom either Change preposition
at the
among
5 months.
As can be seen from the bar graph, the amount of funding by Change preposition
of
British
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the British
Museum
in August is the highest among 4 London museums
with 700 thousand
. Furthermore
, in the same period, History Museums
gain the second funding with 600 thousand
, the
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and the
Museum
in September has the
investment Correct article usage
an
just
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of just
approximate
the second one at under 600 Change the word
approximately
thousand
.
In both June and July, these four museums
are the same as each other, respectively 400, over 400, 200, and around 450 thousand
. Moreover
, in October, the funding of Science Music is the lowest among all these figures, and the average investment of 4 museums
is the lowest either.Submitted by lethigialinh77 on
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