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The internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on the internet? What should be done to control information online?

With the help of the internet, which provides unlimited access to
information
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, people can discover new knowledge from around the world.
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, in my opinion, not all the
information
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 published or shared online can be trusted. To control the spread of
misinformation
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, the
government
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 should take appropriate actions. One of the main reasons some
information
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 is unreliable is that anyone can post freely.
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, people can write whatever they want based on their personal opinions.
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, some individuals who oppose vaccines often share false
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 about them on social media platforms
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 as TikTok and Instagram.
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, the public may believe these misleading stories and develop negative attitudes toward vaccines.
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 contributes to the spread of
misinformation
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. One way to regulate online
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 is for the
government
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 to enforce strict rules.
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 to say, if someone posts false
information
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 online, they should face strict penalties to deter others from doing the same.
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, in Malaysia, if someone spreads false
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 about the
government
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, their account may be banned, and they may be fined heavily.
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, people are more cautious about sharing inaccurate
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 on social media. Another solution is for schools to educate students on how to identify reliable
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.
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, students should be taught not to believe everything they see or read online but to analyze sources and conduct research before accepting
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 as true.
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, when they come across news on social media, they should verify it using reliable sources
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 as CNN or BBC before sharing or believing it.
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 way,
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 can be minimized.
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, I believe that not everything found online can be trusted. The
government
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 plays an important role in controlling
misinformation
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 by enforcing strict regulations and organizing awareness campaigns.

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task achievement
Implement a clearer thesis statement in the introduction that outlines the two main arguments you will discuss (government regulation and education).
coherence cohesion
Consider adding transition phrases between your points to improve the flow of the essay, such as 'Furthermore' or 'In addition.'
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While your examples are relevant, including a brief explanation of how they impact society or individuals could strengthen your argument.
task achievement
The essay presents a clear position on the topic and effectively outlines the issue of unreliable information online.
coherence cohesion
The structure is generally logical, with distinct paragraphs for different aspects of the argument, which aids in understanding.
Your opinion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • accessibility
  • credibility
  • regulation
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • biased reporting
  • public opinion
  • fact-checking
  • curate
  • digital literacy
  • discern
  • censorship
  • free speech
  • integrity
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