Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative developmment?

In recent times,

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number of individuals with health issues are utilizing non-conventional

medicines

and therapies rather than visiting their normal

doctor

. I

totatlly

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believe

this

trend is harmful

for

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people

because

alternative

medicines

and

treatment

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treatments

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do not undergo

of

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government laws, it

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beneficial in emergency cases, and

it

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discourage

people

to visit

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doctor

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.

To begin

with, there are several reasons why I think

alternative

medicines

and treatments can have

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adverse

influnce

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influence

on

people

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health.

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,

alternative

medicines

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authorities control, which

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medicines

can have unknown side effects on

people

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health.

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,

alternative

tretments

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treatments

such

as

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yoga, and meditation can make

people

are

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more vulnerable to

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serious pain in their muscles or even lead to death.

Secondly

,

alternative

medicines

and therapies are not advantageous in emergency cases.

This

is because

alternative

medicines

and therapies need more time to mitigate pain and help

patients

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recovery

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,

people

who get heart

attack

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need

to

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conventional

medicines

like

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western medications because these medications work faster and better than

alternative

medicines

.

Finally

, I believe

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visiting

normal

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doctor

is

extremly

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extremely

important for all

patients

.

This

is because doctors are qualified to deal with

patients

and give

patients

appropriate medications.

In contrast

, I believe

alternative

mediciens

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medicines

medicine

and

tretments

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treatments

treatment

is detrimental for

patients

because

it

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discourage

patients

to

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visiting normal

doctor

.

To sum up

, I completely think

alternative

medicines

and treatments is adverse development because it not under

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of

government

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, it not useful for emergency cases, and

it

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demotivate

people

to visit

ordinary

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doctor

.