Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative developmment?
In recent times,
growing
number of individuals with health issues are utilizing non-conventional Add an article
a growing
medicines
and therapies rather than visiting their normal doctor
. I totatlly
believe Correct your spelling
totally
this
trend is harmful for
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to
people
because alternative
medicines
and treatment
do not undergo Fix the agreement mistake
treatments
of
government laws, it Change preposition
apply
not
beneficial in emergency cases, and Add a missing verb
is not
it
discourage Correct pronoun usage
they
people
to visit normal
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a normal
the normal
doctor
.
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doctors
To begin
with, there are several reasons why I think alternative
medicines
and treatments can have a
adverse Change the article
an
influnce
on Correct your spelling
influence
people
health. Change noun form
people's
Firstly
, alternative
medicines
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authorities control, which Change preposition
apply
mean
maybe Correct subject-verb agreement
means
this
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these
medicines
can have unknown side effects on people
health. Change noun form
people's
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Similarly
alternative
tretments
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treatments
such
as,
yoga, and meditation can make Remove the comma
apply
people
are
more vulnerable to Unnecessary verb
apply
get
serious pain in their muscles or even lead to death.
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getting
Secondly
, alternative
medicines
and therapies are not advantageous in emergency cases. This
is because alternative
medicines
and therapies need more time to mitigate pain and help patients
to
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apply
recovery
. Replace the word
recover
For example
, people
who get heart attack
need Fix the agreement mistake
attacks
to
conventional Change preposition
apply
medicines
like,
western medications because these medications work faster and better than Remove the comma
apply
alternative
medicines
. Finally
, I believe visitng
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visiting
normal
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a normal
doctor
is extremly
important for all Correct your spelling
extremely
patients
. This
is because doctors are qualified to deal with patients
and give patients
appropriate medications. In contrast
, I believe alternative
mediciens
and Correct your spelling
medicines
medicine
tretments
is detrimental for Correct your spelling
treatments
treatment
patients
because it
discourage Correct pronoun usage
they
patients
to
visiting normal Change preposition
from
doctor
.
To sum up
, I completely think alternative
medicines
and treatments is adverse development because it not under control
of Add an article
the control
government
, it not useful for emergency cases, and Add an article
the government
it
demotivate Correct pronoun usage
they
people
to visit ordinary
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an ordinary
the ordinary
doctor
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