It is widely believed, that most of great sportsmen and genius musician have inborn or inherent talents

It is widely believed, that most

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great sportsmen and genius

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have inborn or inherent talents.

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, there is no absolute agreement on whether it is true or every child is able to improve physical skills to become

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person

or

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musician.

This

essay is going to discuss both given views. A commonly held belief is that a number of people are born with a special ability in some fields of art or sport. As evidence, they point to the fact that

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most

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successful music and sports representatives started making their performances

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early ages without any instruction and information about their field.

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, some researches show, that

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of that kind of people were born with strengthened and developed

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special areas of

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body, which helped them in their activity. Genetic features of

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the fact, that can explain

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, as it depends on

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all roots, having inherent skills mostly affected by our parents.

On the other hand

, some people claim that everyone has

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to become successful in any particular area without any natural talents.

For example

, they may mention that the majority of legends of their sphere, like Cristiano Ronaldo, Bill Gets etc, have spent

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amount of time and worked hard to get success without any innate capabilities.

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, let's look at truth, as the result of practice and self-improvement, we all have particular skills, which are

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in our daily life. So, if we are able to learn how to read and write, we are

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able to learn

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musical

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or become good sportsmen. The explanation lies in the fact that

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brain and body memory can memorize some kind of activities and fine motor movements

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repetition and structural exercises. In

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taking everything into

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I would argue that

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has his own portion of inborn talent, which can be easily improved

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the help of big

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of

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and work, which

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that every child can be thought to become a good musician or sports

person

.