POllution is increasing AT AN alarming rate. Causes and solutions.

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It is
rue
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that pollution has been increasing dramatically with the passage of time. There are several causative factors that are leading
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this
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phenomenon.
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,
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issue could be solved by taking certain rigid steps.
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, numerous sorts of industries are establishing.
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has been a chief cause of wastage production. If
this
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leftover is not discarded and dumped properly, it could cause soil contamination.
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, in India, the soil
is not enough fertilise
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for the cultivation of crops
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the drainage of polluted water of a plastic industry in fields.
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, the noise
polution
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pollution
is
also
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on
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peak
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.
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is
due to
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the fact that citizens may not
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the rules of society.
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, in Canada, horns are
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in front of schools which is creating a
deafing
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deafening
commotion, and
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is distracting the children from
study
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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