The pie chart below shows the main reason why agriculutural land become less productive. The table shows how these causes effected three regions of the world during the 1900s
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provided chart illustrates the essential causes that result in a reduction in the production of agricultural Linking Words
land
in three different places. Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen that there were four main factors, which degraded the Linking Words
land
in the three provided contents, but the Use synonyms
land
of Use synonyms
Oceania
was only affected by two of them.
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To begin
, the highest percentage of Linking Words
land
deterioration occurred in Europe, at 23%, which was about four times more than in North America. Use synonyms
In addition
to that, the accountability of deforestation for Linking Words
land
deterioration was, at 30% which made it the second reason. Even though forest demolition was the primary reason for Use synonyms
land
degradation in Europe, at 9.8%, it was the least factor that harm the Use synonyms
land
in the other two locations.
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Although
over-grazing accounted for 35% of Linking Words
land
degradation, it was considered the Use synonyms
last
factor in Europe that ruined the Linking Words
land
, at 5.5%, and it was the first harmful reason to the Earth in Use synonyms
Oceania
, at 11.3%.
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Furthermore
, over-cultivation was responsible for 28% of Linking Words
land
damage, Use synonyms
hence
; it was the biggest factor that degraded the Linking Words
land
in North America, but it did not have any detrimental effect on the Use synonyms
land
in Use synonyms
Oceania
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the total degraded Linking Words
land
in Use synonyms
Oceania
was 13% Use synonyms
whereas
it was 5% in North America. And there were some other reasons for Linking Words
land
deterioration which represented 7%.Use synonyms
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