A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

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Hi Bir, How are you? It's been a long time since we have met. I hope you are doing well as I came to know from my father that you are coming to Brampton, Canada next month for a better job. The most interesting part about

this

province is that it has wonderful and mesmerising places to visit that include the CN tower, Toronto Island, a museum, an aquarium, a lakeshore harbour front, Gage Park downtown and even many more. I think Brampton is the best place to stay as we can see our community people which does not let us feel homesick. The transportation facility is

also

best for travel locally we can go on Brampton Transit, Zum buses,

as well as

the Go train service that takes us all around GTA. It is very accessible and the cheapest way to commute as it is only $4 per person. If you want to make friends even at your job or at any place you visit it is very easy. Because the populace from Punjab resides in B-Town. People are very cooperative, helpful, hardworking, and even help in bad times. In case of any ,emergency u can come to me I will always be with you. Hope to see you soon! Yours truly Parneet Kaur

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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