The diagram shows how chocolate is produced from cacao trees.
The given diagram delineates the production of chocolate.
Overall
, it is discernible from the diagram that Linking Words
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is a linear process with 9 stages, starting from the harvesting of mature pods from cacao trees and ending with the moulding process.
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Initially
, ripe pods are harvested from cacao trees. White cocoa beans collected from these pods are Linking Words
then
fermented for 2 to 10 days before being dried in the sun. After that, beans are roasted at 120 to 150 degrees C and Linking Words
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taken to a machine where they are crushed. During Linking Words
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stage, the outer shell is removed, and the inner part is pressed, which is called the conching process.
After conching, the inner part is tempered into liquid. Linking Words
Finally
, the liquid is moulded into shapes.Linking Words
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