You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: - Explain that you have completed your studies - Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code - Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Mom and Dad, I'm doing great and I hope both of you are in good health. I have good news for you, ready? I completed my bachelor's with an

overall

B+. I was expecting an A actually, but remember the fever I had during

last

semester's exam? I couldn't perform

as well as

I liked, so can't complain. The result got published yesterday evening and I'm writing

this

to you the next morning. I am writing to let you know about the graduation. The graduation ceremony will be held in the university main hall on 15th July from 12:00 noon onwards. We have to be there by 10:00 am so that we have enough time for check in. It is expected to be wrapped up by 6 pm which is follwed by a dinner for all the guests and fresh graduates, which will take place in the canteen hall. Of course it's a formal event so I suggest you to prepare formal dresses. And guess what? I have 2 extra tickets.

Although

you two can decide whom to invite, I suggest you take uncle Ben and aunt Lisa. Anyway, let me know by

this

weekend because I have to book places for you all to stay and it will be difficult to find around graduation time. I'm looking forward for your reply. Take care. Your Son, Jake

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