The illustration below shows how the water cycle works and the pie charts provide some statistical information.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram and the pie charts depict information about the
water
system. The diagram illustrates the Use synonyms
water
cycle in nature, Use synonyms
while
the pie charts present the statistics on the total world Linking Words
water
and freshwater Use synonyms
resources
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broken down.
As can be observed, Change preposition
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the
first diagram, there are four stages in the entire Change preposition
in the
water
cycle. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the Linking Words
water
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resources
from seas and surfaces are absorbed and Use synonyms
evaporate
into the atmosphere Wrong verb form
evaporated
due to
solar heat. Linking Words
This
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water
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then
condenses to form clouds. After the condensation, the Linking Words
water
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resources
are precipitated as rain. All of the Use synonyms
raining
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rain
water
percolates into the land area and becomes Use synonyms
the
groundwater through the Correct article usage
apply
stage
process of percolation.
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staging
According to
the pie graphs, it is evident that about 97.5% of the total world Linking Words
water
is saltwater , leaving only 2.5% as freshwater. Simultaneously, it is apparent that the largest category of Use synonyms
fresh
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freshwater
water
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resources
, comprising 68.9%, of freshwater is from glaciers and permanent snow cover. Groundwater accounts for 30.8% of freshwater Use synonyms
resources
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, a mere 0.3% of the total comes from lakes and river storage.Linking Words
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