In some countries eventhough the rates of serious crimes are decreasing people feel less safe than over before. What do you think are the causes of this problemand what measurescould be taken to solve it

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individual
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individuals
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feel unsafe but
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in these
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countries vigorous
crime
rates are
reducing
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by
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the government
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. In my
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,
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the causes
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of
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these
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problems
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are social
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media and
corruption should be
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solution
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for
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first,
one of the
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for
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the many
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people feel
unsafe is social media. Most of the fake
news
spread
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throughout
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world
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messages,
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uncontrolled
accounts, hackers and
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over
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which
are
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cause
to
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significant problems
such
as
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may
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angry,
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wrong decision or
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feeling
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insecure. For
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example, in our country, during Covid
pandemic
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many
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fake
news
spread all over the country
which
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is
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many
individual
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are infected to
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coronavirus
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that
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which
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lead to death.
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result
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It has affected the public mental health through isolation and loneliness. Another reason members of
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society feel insecure is
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due to
the corruption because many criminal cases are unsolved or take
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time to solve it.
Consequently
, people lost their
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in the law
hence
they feel insecure.
Secondly
, to increase the confidence level of individuals should
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some solution to
the
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society. One of the
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is
make
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an
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awarness
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awareness
about
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the
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social
media
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false
news
and every individual should take care of them,
aware
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of the
news
and
also
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the rest
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of the
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contents
contacts
.
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one is the Government should take
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responsibility
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the
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crime
cases which
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should
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an
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immidiate
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immediate
action against
crime
and have to close the case
with in
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within
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few months
consequently
citizens feel safe.
To conclude
, despite the
crime
rates are declined members of the society feel insecure. So
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the spreading
fake
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of fake
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news
and
increase
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the
believe
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belief
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on
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in
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the law may cause to increase the
citizens
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confident
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confidence
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in the
inthe
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in the
security

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