the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.

the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.
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The bar chart illustrates data about the world's future prediction of the
growth
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of the urban population between 1950 and 2030.
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, it can be seen that there are fluctuations during the era. The Whole World, Africa, Asia and Latin America had an upward trend during the period.
To begin
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with, Whole World has rise variation during the period.
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, during 1950 it had
30
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per
cent
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of
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in urbanisation and is expected 60 per
cent
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of the population in 2030.
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, Africa has the least
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in city individuals during 1950 but managed to rise by 60 per
cent
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by 2030.
On the other hand
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, Asia
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has less
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of people in 1950 with 12%, but managed and rises 40 per
cent
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in 2000,
as well as
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, it is expected to raise top in 2030.
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, Latin America has
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increasing trend since 1950 and is expected to reach a peak during 2030.
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, it had 65 per
cent
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of urban people
growth
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during 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words growth, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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