The chart below shows the percentage of households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The chart illustrates the number of
people
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who owned and rented
houses
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for living in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. It is clearly observed from the chart that over the period,
people
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were willing to purchase
houses
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and these demands and capabilities were equal in 1971. In 1918, the figure of the public in owned accommodations was up to 20%,
whereas
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that in rented places was under 80% which was the highest proportion of living in rented
houses
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over the years. The proportion of
people
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with owned
houses
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rose minimally,
in contrast
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, that of rented
houses
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had a gradual decrease. In 1971, these figures were as much as each other. From 1971 onwards, the patterns were the same and in 2001 the percentage of
people
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who lived in their own places was just under 70%, whilst the figure for the households renting accommodations was approximately 32%.
This
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trend had a margin changer over the next decade, as in 2011, the figure for the population in their owning places decreased to about 65%, in ,contrast the percentage of households renting
houses
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grew to 38%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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