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Today,there is less communication between family members than in the past,what has caused this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The
fact
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 that less
communication
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 between family
members
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 than in the past is becoming more widespread among many people these days.
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 essay will examine the causes of
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 tendency and,
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 I can neither completely think it is a positive nor negative development for a variety of reasons. There are a variety of different causes for
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 matter.
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 ,with some
parents
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 are often busy with their work and
children
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also
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 have some problems with them. In
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, almost
parents
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 work 8 hours a day and they go back home tired and stressed,
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 they need
time
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 for rest and relaxation.
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,
children
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 have a lot of homework they have to finish. Both
parents
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 and
children
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 don'
t
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 have leisure
time
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 to talk or share with each. I believe that less
communication
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 between family
members
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 than in the past both positive and negative. On the one hand, everyone can spend their
time
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 relaxing, preparing energy for the next day working or learning.
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, in the
last
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 month, my family tested when we don'
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 spend
time
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 talking together will have what is different, so amazing, my parent and I have a lot of
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 to play sports, listen to music and study a new language.
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, I believe that less
communication
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 between family
members
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 than in the past is negative.
Firstly
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, when family
members
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 do not communicate together, they can'
t
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 understand deep about each person, and
this
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 is lead to some problems. In
fact
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, when
parents
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 don'
t
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 talk with their
children
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, they can'
t
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 know about the situation study of their
children
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 and sometimes they difficult to share about themself. In conclusion, the
fact
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 that less
communication
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 between family
members
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 than in the past is a big problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. It's mainly caused by they have to work and study
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 they don'
t
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 have
time
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 to talk.
Although
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 less
communication
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 between family
members
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 has some positive. I'm convinced that family
members
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 should talk and share with the family closer.
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