The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.

The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
The following table compares the people who spent their money
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three different types of consumption including food, drinks, tobacco, clothing, footwear, leisure, and education in five countries
such
as Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that Turkey's people were leading the graph by all categories, followed by Italy, Spain, and Ireland,
while
the country with the least number expenditure was Sweden. In terms of the first items, Turkey provided the main consumption
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32.14, per cent which was the biggest
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in the data, and
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clothing
footwear was at 6.63
as well as
the quantity of leisure and education was at 4,35.
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, Ireland was slightly lower than it at 28.91 per cent,
Italy
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and Spain showed broadly similar trends at 18.80 and 16.36 per cent respectively. As for Sweden,
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