Some people believe that parents are responsible for children growing into responsible citizens. Others think that teachers should do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a matter of fact that raising

children

with great values to be decent

future

citizens

is the

parents

'

responsibility

,

however

,

teachers

as well have a significant role to play in

this

matter,

therefore

I do believe that the

responsibility

is divided equally between them. In

this

essay, I will elaborate on my perspective with realistic examples.

To begin

with, the first priority for each family is to make their offspring well-brought-up

children

, and

their

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are many factors associated with

this

process,

firstly

, they must teach them the difference between good and bad manners,

secondly

,

children

must be taught

the

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meaning of reward and punishment,

additionally

, raising the sense of self-confidence in them in early age will help them in their

future

to be responsible

citizens

and leaders.

For instance

, families in some Developing Countries tend to take their

children

to their

work places

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workplaces

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to make them watch how they strive to secure their

future

and to get their needs, and

as a result

of

this

,

children

will always have these memories when they grow up,

in addition

, they will have ambition to be great

citizens

like their

parents

.

On the other hand

,

teachers

not only carry out the educational mission but

also

have a growing

responsibility

with regard to young learners, they must take into account that

some times

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pupils spend more time at school,

hence

they must consider that raising side has paramount importance as much as educational side.

For instance

, the

ministry

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Ministry

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of

education

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Education

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in Egypt

make

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makes

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aportion

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a portion

of

teachers

' promotions based on

parents

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parents'

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recommendations,

thus

it reflects that

parents

sometimes rely on

teachers

to raise their

children

with

well

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good

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manners especially if fathers and mothers are

bread winners

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breadwinners

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and do not have sufficient time for

this

. In conclusion,

parents

and

teachers

have a significant

responsibility

to raise

children

in the right way to be good

citizens

in the

future

,

therefore

their role should be appreciated by everyone in society.