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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given table compares the changes in the number of international travellers in different regions, in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
It is clear that
 the total figure of international travellers increased in the given 15-year period.
However
, the increase was the most marked from 1990 to 1995.
According to
 the statistics, Europeans like travelling abroad the most, with the highest figure of around 280 sums in 1995 and reaching an all-time high of nearly 400
million
 in the year 2005.
By contrast
, the Middle East had the least number of people travelling abroad, which grew from 9.8
million
 in 1995 to 15.8
million
 in 2005. Africa and Asia and the Pacific experienced a similar increasing trend of international tourists from 1990 to 2005. In America, people showed a great willingness to travel abroad between 1990 and 1995, from 80.5 to 112.5
million
.
Then
, the number stayed more or less at the same level till 2005.
Likewise
, Europe
also
 experienced a very significant increase from 1990 to 1995, in the overseas travel population, but after 1995 there was an increase of only 10 lot.
Overall
, Europe contributed the most to overseas travel,
whereas
 the Middle East had the least share of overseas travellers.
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