In the last decade, there has been a great increase in international travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing?

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International journey witnessed a major rise in
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some cause behind
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phenomenon which I think is advantageous. In
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behind
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benefits. Travelling around the globe is not a new action but it developed in
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century because of
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of reasons.
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of modern technology and accommodation tools is the major reason for
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faster and easier.
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, globalism and
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of international corporations made it fundamental for businessmen or their companies member to travel to different countries to handle their job and find potential investment opportunities. International voyage has
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impact on many aspects of societies,
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improvements, cultural engagement, political credibility, scientific
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advancements
and more so, in my opinion, taking trips to various parts of the world is beneficial both for the traveller and the location of
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, I think the reason behind the soaring trend of international travel rate is
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on so many factors including the development of technology, globalism and
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economical
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progress.
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increasing trend has many advantages for countries which are the destinations of international expeditions and can help these societies to evolve.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Affordability
  • Emerging economies
  • Disposable income
  • Technological advancements
  • Globalization
  • Interconnected
  • Cultural exchange
  • Tourism infrastructure
  • Carbon footprint
  • Heritage preservation
  • Economic growth
  • Burgeoning middle class
  • Online booking platforms
  • Travel apps
  • Social media influence
  • Global understanding
  • Cultural impact
  • Sustainable travel
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