The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
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The three pie graphs illustrate the alters in annual expenditure by a specific United Kingdom
school
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during three years namely, 1981,1991, and 2001.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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during given the
school
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spending highest among
of
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apply
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their budget in
teachers
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teachers'
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wages,
while
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spneding
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spending
speeding
on insurance was
least
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the least
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.
Furthermore
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, all spending categories showed fluctuations over
given
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a given
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period except insurance and other
workers
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workers'
worker's
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salaries showed
increased
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increases
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and declined, respectively. Looking at pie
chars
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charts
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in more detail, we can see during
given
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a given
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period
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school
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schools
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expenditures
highest
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the highest
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amount of
of
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apply
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their money. To
illusrate
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illustrate
in 1981,1991,
2001
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and 2001
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range
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the range
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of spending
in
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on
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teachers
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teachers'
teacher's
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salaries was from 40 to 50 %.
In contrast
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, insurance received
least
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the least
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amont
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amount
of spending
of
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on
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school
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from 2 to 8%. Regarding
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the others
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others
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other
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categories, other
workers
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workers'
worker's
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salaries showed
decreased
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decrease
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over
given
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a given
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period from 28 to 15 %. Furniture and equipment from 1981 to 1991 showed went down from 15 to 5 % ,and after
that
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,that
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it showed raised from 9 to 23% per cent.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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