The charts below show the distribution of the World's water and the use of water in three countries

The graphs illustrate how the Earth’s

water

is distributed and provide information on how it is used in three countries.

Overall

, it

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to highlight that just a vast amount of the World’s

water

is salt

water

. The remaining quantity of fresh

water

is

unfrequently

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infrequently

surface

water

,

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but can be easily found in ice and glaciers.

Besides

, in terms of

the

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water

usage,

while

Egypt and Saudi Arabia use

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majority of it for agriculture, Canada uses it mainly for industrial purposes. It is crucial to mention that

while

97% of the Earth’s

water

is salted, just 3% is fresh

water

. The latter is composed as follows: 79% is in ice and glaciers, followed by 20% of

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water

, and

lastly

1% of surface

water

. With respect to the use of

water

, it is essential to remark that Egypt and Canada bore

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in the amount used in the agriculture field, with more than 70% of it destined

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that usage.

In contrast

, Canada used around 10% of

water

for

this

aim. The latter country used approximately 80% of its

water

in the industrial area,

while

the two other countries used less than 10% for that usage.

Lastly

, the three countries used almost the same amount of

water

for domestic

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(around

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10%).