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some people think only students who achieve the best academic results should be rewarded, while others think it is important to reward who show improvement. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #students #results #reward #show #improvement
Giving a
reward
 to
students
 who get
a
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greet
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great
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 success in study is necessary. And it is a common phenomenon in
everyday
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the everyday
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 education system. Some people think it is a useful method, but others think the
students
 who show progress in studying
are
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should be
reward
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. Both
statement
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 will be discussed in
this
 essay. It is admitted that
give
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 a
reward
 to
students
 with good academic performance can set an example and stimulate other
students
. When the
reward
are
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 given to those fast learners , it sends a signal to all
students
,which is
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that greet
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greet
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great
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 academic results can gain the
reward
. Slow learners will study harder than before. They will correct
the
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 attitude and pay more attention to study. Finding the shortcomings in learning and
figure
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 it out.
Besides
 they will improve
the
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their
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 self-discipline ability and learn about how to manage time as
students
 who are good at studying
as
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. After a period of time, academic performance will improve,
other
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and other
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students
 can
also
 get the
reward
.
On the other hand
, rewarding
to
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apply
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students
 with improved grades is important too. It recognizes
themselves
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their
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 effort, and it is a
encourage
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encouraging
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 way. But most
the
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students
which
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who
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 received the progress award ranked low in academic performance in the class.They have more capacity to improve,which
meas
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means
 more opportunities to obtain the award.It is unfair to
students
 with limited room for improvement. And the difficulty of progress is much easier than the difficulty of achieving academic results.
To sum up
, it seems to me that schools should
reward
who
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those who
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 score the highest in exams rather than those who make academic improvements.
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