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Some children spend their days on smart phones what is the case of this and is it is a negative or a positive development

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Nowadays, Some of our children spend almost their whole days on smartphones.The reason for
this
 phenomenon
that
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 they have many free
hours
 per day and their parents are not having time to spend with them. In my opinion, it is a negative development. it leads to several problems in studying and communication.
Juvenilies
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Juveniles
 have spent their days on tablets, and smartphones. The primary reason for
this
 is that mothers and fathers spend most of their time
in
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their jobs .when they go back to their homes , they need to relax.
Therefore
, they give the
phones
 to their
junvenlities
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unrealities
 to stop them from crying .
For instance
, many Arabic people in Europe countries are working for many
hours
 the father works about 12
hours
 and the mother works bout 8
hours
.
However
,
smart
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smartphones
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phones
 are entertainment for our daughters and sons, they
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heart
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 them. As
While
 ,children use them , they will
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 the
felling
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feeling
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 of enjoyment of personal communication .
Moreover
, the
effectivines
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effectiveness
 of their brains will decline they will
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 their focus. As they spend many
hours
 watching short reels .
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, research papers proved that today's youth can study maximum
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 about 50
hours
.
Hence
, they create for youth a
promot
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promote
 techniques studying. Which is Studying for
30or
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30 or
 45 minutes ,
then
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take
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 a rest for 10 minutes to handle
this
 problem.
Although
, there are many reasons
for
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why our juveniles spent the majority of their days on their
smart
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smartphones
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phones
 ,
as
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 the huge
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time schedule for parents , and plenty of
hours
 our daughters and sons have . Those reasons are not strong enough to support the idea of giving tablets, and
phones
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 them. As it causes problems in studying for our new generation and makes them less entire active members.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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