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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes exactly with them .Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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"Having a friend who is always the same opinion as us is better" is some people's belief, but other people think different
opinions
 among
friends
 certainly are great occasionally. In point of my view,
disagreement
 can be effective in different subjects sometimes. On the one hand, some people always tend to have relationships with each of their
friends
 who always agree with their
opinions
 or decisions, because of their selfishness and arrogance. Regardless of its results on the survival of their relationships, they have more insist on their wrong communications. In my mind, it is not that, we should have friendly relationships with some of our
friends
 who disagree with us. It is that achieving the best communication with our
friends
 can be not related to the quality of our
opinions
.
On the other hand
,
in addition
 to
disagreement
opinions
 among
friends
 have never been spoiling their relationship with each other only arrogance and selfishness have included more harmful behaviour in their continuing. In order to be explaining
opinions
 and believing to it the individual must avoid forcing them on each other, but it is possible some of
this
 kind of
disagreement
 can help us to improve or develop the aim in future, which will be a pleasure to us. In my opinion, if we have used great comments from our
friends
 even though they disagreed with us, they not should matter to us because they have made us so excited and lighting. In conclusion, I think, when there are
disagreement
opinions
 among
friends
, it always will not be spoiled them, of course, they can use it to the most their progress, but it should not be repeated always.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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